Wednesday, January 27, 2010

Advice from my peers

Let's just say I know a guy who knows a guy who writes lyrics. By property of association, and by common knowledge, this friend of a friend is obviously me, but you don't know that. So I, uh, I mean, this guy I know has these lyrics, and he's not too sure he can use them as part of his "presentation" for our class. The only way I could think of is to get your opinions before letting Hudak eat my soul. Please, just take a look and tell me if you think it's "PG-13" enough for class.

This is called "Animalistic". (which has nothing to do with Animal from the Muppets, trust me)

That look in your eye,
It teases me so.
You'll push me to the edge,
I'll have nowhere to go.
You're unlocking my cage,
Is something amiss?
Or is it that you fear
This animal's kiss?

Biting, bleeding,
Heavy breathing,
Primal screaming!
It's so sick!
Grunting, growling,
Midnight howling,
Teeth shown scowling!
Animalistic!

There's nowhere to hide,
I'm coming for you.
It's the thrill of the hunt,
There's nothing you can do.
Your scent is in the air, Let me eat you whole!
I want to taste your blood,
Let me steal your soul!

Biting, bleeding,
Heavy breathing,
Primal screaming!
It's so sick!
Grunting, growling,
Midnight howling,
Teeth shown scowling!
Animalistic!

You love it, but still
You can't get enough.
You try to take me on,
But, babe, I'm just too much.
I'm driven by instinct,
The animal law.
And I want you to hear,
This animal's call!

Biting, bleeding,
Heavy breathing,
Primal screaming!
It's so sick!
Grunting, growling,
Midnight howling,
Teeth shown scowling!
Animalistic!

Now comes the moment of truth. Is this too risky, or could I possibly get away with this?

2 comments:

  1. Well, you might be able to get away with it, since it doesn't actually come out and say anything. It just kind of...hints heavily at the subject matter.

    Although I'm not quite sure...you might want to show Hudak and ask her about it.

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  2. Ok, thank you so much! =) I'll let Hudak read it and see.

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