So I really like this idea of dino-people, but I thought up a new twist. It parallels "Planet of the Apes" in the way that humans (us) are captured and used as slaves for the domanint race. It's been done before, but I think I may have a way to make it differ from the others. Perhaps if I make it about a slave-gang gone bad or something like that. Like the humans grow smarter and revolt against the dino-people. I'm not sure why, but it still has that "Planet of the Apes" feel about it. Ugh, this is going to annoy me... >=(
Well maybe i could make the story about Earth's twin sister, which orbits just as fast as us on the other side of the sun. That way it wouldn't have been seen with the other 7 planets... =) Hey, this is good! I could roll with that! Okay, but that still comes back to "Planet of the Apes". I can't seem to escape that, can I?
Let's see, what else can be thought of? Ummm, oh, characters! =) Let's see, well, we need a hero. Someone who's going to make the journey to this new world... Let's call this new world Elista! =) That's a good name! So, our hero must make the perilous space journey to Elista, fight those foul lizard freaks, and save the day! Hmmm, he'd need a heroic name. Carol! No... Chi Chi! No... I've got it! Chuck Norris... ... ... Nah, too robust. Hmmm, how about spaceman Sam? Nah, how about Lucas? Yea, Lucas! Lucas the spaceman, from planet Earth! Works for me...
So Lucas's ship is going to orbit the sun, and his crew finds a planet! "Oh hey! Look, a planet!" And his crew talk him into landing on it, because it's got oxygen on it. "Let's go!" "Kk." So as they land they take a wrong turn and crash land and everyone basically dies but him, so Lucas has to learn to live in this modern jurassic park. And he comes across dinos. "Oh hey! Dinos!" "RAWR!!! Num num num!" "Ahhh!" So then he's captured and forced to work in a mine to mine iron for their war ships. But he finds some other humans and they fight and most of them die, but he gets away and steals a ship and takes home to planet Earth... But they follow him, and then he finds out they were planing to enslave all of planet Earth, and that's what the war ships are for! God I'm good! =)
Tell me what you think!
Jammer
Monday, February 22, 2010
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Certainly interesting. The idea of an Earth orbiting opposite the sun from us makes my inner scientist RAEG! but it's all in fun, I suppose.
ReplyDeleteI like Spaceman Sam, but Lucas is a perfectly decent name.
would u want to edit this piece for me?
ReplyDeletexD I love the commentary/planning of it. o.o And the names are very well chosen too. If you do end up writing this, I'll be looking forward to reading it. What happened to zombie idea?
ReplyDeleteit flopped...
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